Internet dating sites are overflowing with eligible singles, all vying for the same attention, the competition can be fierce. To compete with all those personal ads, you need to write a profile that stands out from the rest, captures the readers attention, and makes them want to respond to you. If not, you might miss out on meeting someone who is a really good match.
While searching online personals I can across quite a few profile that didn't impress me much. I listed a few of them below, just to give you an idea of "What Not To Do" when it comes time to write your own dating profile.
Remember - if you are going to post your profile on a dating site, write one that will gets you the results.
Hey SeXXXy!!!!!!
I am 22, I go to college in London Ontario for Marketing and I live in Stratford. I love hockey, going to the bars with the guys and playing pool. Not really sure what else to say so I will leave it at that :)
Sounds like a real winner. Watch out girls, I saw him first!
Nice guy looking for a nice girl
I a genuinely open and friendly guy, hard to come by these days. I like to spend time around friends, and always love to meet new people. I like to keep myself busy, can't stand sitting around doing nothing.
Not exactly bad, just a bit too vague for my taste.
FREAK! Or someone like that...me I guess. COME ON! LOOK HERE!!!
Snuggly guy, 6'2", 165 lbs. Just moved to Vancouver, looking for friends and people to show me around the city. Is that you? Are you sure? I am pretty weird...ok then. :)
Probably a nice guy - but why risk it.
MALE 25YRS SINGLE
I AM A VERY STRAIGHT PERSON .UNMARRIED & LOOKING FOR SOMEONE TO GET MARRIED WITH. THATS ALL WHAT I CAN SAY RIGHT NOW. FOR ME IT HARDLY MATTERS IF U R A DIVORCEE ALSO.
Avoid using all CAPS when writing your profile, makes it harder to read.
"Cacktas The Sign of Loyality"
I am Farooq i have only one frend name is AYAZ and he say about me that farooq is a gentleman personhardworking faothfull good looking and and and..................... and wot i am in my point of view i like treveling i want to go all over theworld mmmmmm like music of shehzad i am very much bus kafee zayada tareeef achee nahi haotee...............!
Remember to check your spelling - this profile is a mess.
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